2011年9月6日 星期二

1 Family Backgrund

My name is Sheng, Hong-yang.  I have three members in my family.  My father is a person with good attitude to do everything.  For example, if I didn’t do well on exam, he always tells me not to care about it.  Because he has seen that I have done my best and I have good attitude to be faced with exam. Otherwise, he works hard day and night to make our ends meet.  He also advises me not to give up easily, and he wants me to remember a great saying: Where there is a will, there is a way.  It would help me through my lifetime to feel endlessly enjoyable, while I conduct myself in accordance with every words my father has told to me.  My mother is a housewife.  I think that she is a great mother.  She never complain any words when she does many housework.  For instance, she always wishes our dirty clothes after we take a bath.  After that, she also wishes dishes after we have dinner.  Although she has to do a lot of things everyday, she still does well and never makes mistakes.  I admire her for good responsibility.  I am lucky to have wonderful family.

3 則留言:

  1. She never complain any words when she does many housework.
    動詞沒變化

    其他都OK~~

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  2. good attitude to do everything...好像怪怪的?應該可以改成 good attitude on doing everything.有時後to/toward可以換成on

    She never complain any words ???
    For instance, she always wishes our dirty clothes after we take a bath.什麼意思???是washes嗎....= =

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  3. 可以分段一下

    動辭的變化要多留意哦~

    其他都OK~~~~

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