Explaining a Process-3

In order to get from the Visitor Center to the Liberty Bell Pavillion, follow these directions.  First, go west three blocks from the Visitor Center.  Then turn right on Sixth Street for one block.  The Liberty Bell Pavillion is on your right.

Explaining a Process-2

I am going to show that black is a better collector of solar energy than white.  All you need are two tin cans, black and white paint, and room thermometer.  First of all, paint the cans-one black, one white.  Then, fill the cans with water.  After that, put the cans in direct sunlight for three hours.  Finally, check the temperature of the water in the cans and compare.  You will find that the temperature of the water in the black can is higher.  This proves enough that black is a better collector of solar energy than white.

Explaining a Process-1

It  is easy to pot a plant if you follow the right procedure.  First of all, cover bottom of pot with small stones.  Secondly, put two inches of soil on top.  Third, make a hole in center of soil.  Then, drop plant into soil.  After that, add soil until it almost reaches top of pot.  Next, press soil down with thumbs.  Finally, water plant.

A Wonderful Trip-revised 1

Last Sunday, I had a wonderful trip which is in my mind forever.  I woke up early as usual.  After I got up, my parents told me that we had a family trip.  I didn't expect it at all because my parents always visit old friends for a family trip.  Hence, I wasn't happy then.  On the way to our destination, I saw a lot of scenery that I had never seen.  After we arrived at the destination, I was surprised.  My parents took us to an amusement park.  I was nothing but excited at that moment.  In the amusement park, the first facility I played was the Roller Coaster.  It made me not only excited but frightened.  Also, I had taken the Spinging Tea Cups.  After I took it, I felt disgusted.  In the amusement park, it was an unforgettable experience.  Although I felt tired after I went home, I still couldn't forget it.  To sum up, I had a wonderful trip last Sunday.  I thought that I would never feel bored when my parents told me that we had a family trip.

A Wonderful Trip

Last Sunday, I had a wonderful trip which is in my mind forever.  I woke up early as usual.  After I got up, my parents told me that we had a family trip.  I didn't expect it at all because my parents always visit old friends for a family trip.  Hence, I wasn't happy then.  On the way to our destination, I saw a lot of scenery that I had never seen.  After we arrived at the destination, I was surprised.  My parents took us to an amusement park.  I was nothing but excited at that moment.  In the amusement park, the first facility I played was the Roller Coaster.  It make me not only excited but frightened.  Also, I had taken the Spinging Tea Cups.  After I took it, I feel disgusted.  In the amusement park, it was an unforgettable experience.  Although I feel tired after I went home, I still couldn't forget it.  To sum up, I had a wonderful trip last Sunday.  I though that I would never feel bored when my parents told me that we had a family trip.

Never giving up can achieve your goal-revised 1

 In May 2005, an athlete won a championship which he got in a one-hundred-meter race because he got a lot of  trainings. However, he wanted to become a famous athlete.  As a result, he practiced running day and night.  Unfortunately, he didn't take a rest until he was sent to the hospital for his broken leg.  Although he was in the hospital, he still wanted to realize his dream.  By means of his patience, he was committed to practice running with one leg.  As the proverb goes, " No pain, no gain."  He defeated all athletes from others countries and won the World Cup Championship finally.  To sum up, the story tells us not to give up when you are faced with many difficulties.

Never give up can achieve your goal

  In May 2005, an athlete won a champion which he got in a one hundred miles running game for he had  a lot of  trainings.  However, he wanted to become a famous athlete.  As a result, he practiced running day and night.  Unfortunately, he didn't take a rest until he was sent to the hospital for his broken leg.  Although he was in the hospital, he still wanted to come up with his dream.  By means of his patience, he was committed to practice running with one leg.  As the proverb goes, " No pain, no gain."  He defeated all athletes from others countries and won the world cup champion finally.  To sum up, the story tells us not to give up when you are faced with any difficulties.