2011年4月6日 星期三

How to Plan Trip

Planing a trip can be very easy.  First, you should choose a destination which you want to go.  For example,if you would like to appreciate snow scenery, you had better go to North America. Furthermore, if you want to go to the Disney Park, you will plan to go to Tokyo.  Then, after you decide your destination, you should choose a date.  How about during winter vacation?  When most your friends are free?  After that, you need to check in the rooms in the hotel, airplant tickets, and locality map.  Finally, you only have to wait the trip is coming and anything is finished.  With happy mood, you can enjoy your trip without anything.

6 則留言:

  1. Hello,
    For example,if you would like to appreciate snow scenery, you had better go to North America. 你的would 可以省略

    you will plan to go to Tokyo. will 改成can

    you only have to wait the trip is coming and anything is finished.
    wait the trip →wait for the tirp coming and anything is finished.

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  2. locality map=>local 就好了吧?
    you can enjoy your trip without anything.
    為啥用anything?
    When most your friends are free most 跟your 之間+of?

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  3. you only have to wait the trip is coming and anything is finished...


    怪怪的
    應該是the only thing..之類的?

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  4. without anything 不懂
    其他感覺滿流暢的

    if you would like to appreciate snow scenery, you had better go to North America
    這應該用want感覺比較順口哈哈

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  5. 還不錯
    中間那段問題了話
    前面可以加個for instance 或such as之類的
    然後迪士尼樂園好像是Disneyland?

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  6. 第一句用where比較好

    When most your friends are free?
    上一句已經是問號了 所以不能用when來承接上句

    you need to check in the rooms in the hotel, airplant tickets, and locality map
    你check in 這個動詞片語並不能用在後面兩個名詞上阿

    you only have to wait the trip is coming and anything is finished
    這文法錯的離譜喔!!

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