I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Vocational Commercial Senior High School . I am glad to have so nice school and class. My classmates are humorous and kind. When I have a hard time doing my homework, they will help me deal with it. Furthermore, when I don’t do well on exams, they can’t laugh at me. Instead of laughing, they would encourage me to cheer up and make me happy. Because of them, I feel that my life in senior high school is colorful.
I join basketball club for three years when I am in the NTCVS. This club not only makes me know how to improve my skills but also let me make a lot of friends in NTCVS. Playing basketball is my favorite hobby, and it also teaches me how to keep good attitude on everything in my daily life. For example, once we went to play a game with another school, during the game, we lost 10 points when we only have ten minutes. However, we still didn’t give up that we do our utmost to beat the rival. Before the game’s final, I got a three points shot and we won the game. This experience makes me know that never give up and stick to the last second.
Being an English major, I study English everyday. I study not only English books but also English songs. I believe that the more English I learn, the better feature I will have. By mean of doing this things, I think that my English has improved a lot. However, that is not enough to me. I want to advance my English ability at University.
Furthermore, when I don’t do well on exams, they can’t laugh at me. can't 好像怪怪的...
回覆刪除we lost 10 points when we only have ten minutes. 你想表達的是..你們還'剩下'10分鐘??
the better feature I will have.... the better "future" I will have.
By mean of doing this things, ...by means of doing these things, ...
還不錯
回覆刪除活動跟學習都有
其他的疑惑同上面一樣
再修飾一下下
或是換個方式敘述^^
they can’t laugh at me...是說我們笑你就會被你殺球嗎0.0
回覆刪除encourage me to cheer up感覺有點贅子
I join basketball club for three years when I am in the NTCVS
你用for了盡量不要現在式
mprove my skills but also let +s
Before the game’s final final我覺得不可以這樣用
這些事情應該都是發生過了吧 要用過去是比較好
回覆刪除其他 就OK 都有寫到