2011年5月18日 星期三

Contrasting-2

I have received two resumes, and I chose Debra Fine to be English Instructor in our school for following reasons.  First of all, Debra studied in BA English, McGill University from 1993 to 1997.  Besides, she also studied MA English, University of Toronto and PhD Linguistics, University of Pennsylvania.  However, Lynn only studied in BA Spanish, New York University.  Secondly, Debra is abundant in experience because she has worked at least eighteen years.  Unlike Debra, Lynn didn't has so much experience like her. Third, Debra also publicated English Verb Tenses, Shortman Publishing Company, 2006, but Lynn didn't do it.  Last but no least, Debra not only can teach English for students but also can teach how to swim for studens.  On the other hand, Lynn only can teach English for students.  To sum up, I expect that Debra Fine can do her best to let her student do well on their English abilities.

5 則留言:

  1. 英文老師少了定冠詞THE
    整篇還不錯 GOOD!!

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  2. Secondly, Debra is.... Secondly, Debra has

    publicated....published


    in 2006


    重要的是,你把人名打錯了!

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  3. Third, Debra also publicated English Verb Tenses, Shortman Publishing Company, 2006, but Lynn didn't do it. 後面那個東西應該是出版社不是書名了 不能這樣放吧?

    然後出版社不太重要應該不用打吧

    On the other hand, Lynn only can teach English for students.

    他也有其他語言的才能 應該不是只能教英文吧

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  4. 還可以 比起上一篇 不錯

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