In Taiwan , authorities still use the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment. In my opinion, I agree with use the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment because it deters people from committing crimes. Those who are critical of this idea think that it is harsher to serve a life in prison. I am on the same page as those who stand up for the death penalty. The reason is that it makes criminals pay the ultimate price. But opponents of this idea claim that it sometimes means killing an innocent person. It is often argued that it is a punishment that cannot be changed. However, I am in favor of using the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment. Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that I insist using the death penalty to punish ex-convict.
可以多用一些連接詞把你的論點串起來
回覆刪除I agree with use the death penalty
回覆刪除你怎麼會在 with後面直接加 use阿!!!!
這也太離譜了吧
也是相同字詞出現許多次
然後要多一點連接詞
不然看的都眼花撩亂
with use the death penalty using謝謝
回覆刪除感覺上打別人的觀點打太多 而且感覺原因不夠
連接詞
回覆刪除.....原因有點少
agree with + V-ing
回覆刪除連接詞有點少 唸起來不順暢