2011年4月27日 星期三

comparing-2

There are two driver's license which found in the park.  One license's owner called Stephanie Brooks,and the other called Ann Friedman.  Stephanie's eyes are the same color as Ann's.  And both Stephanie and Ann have black hair.  Furthermore, Stephanie is the same height as Ann.  Stephanie born in July 7, 1970.  Similarly, Ann also born in July 7, 1970.

7 則留言:

  1. be called
    不然會沒有動詞
    一樣 on+date
    還有少了結論句

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  2. born on
    有點單調 都用一樣的
    單複數注意

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  3. There are two driver's license which found in the park found前面+are

    恩.....啊你怎麼知道是在公園裡找到的

    in July 7, 1970 =>on July 7, 1970

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  4. Ann also born in July 7, 1970.

    不是用in吧

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  5. Stephanie born in July 7, 1970. Similarly, Ann also born in July 7, 1970. 這兩個句子可以合併起來
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    介係詞, 生日應該是on不是in
    還有你的結論句~~

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