There are two driver's license which found in the park. One license's owner called Stephanie Brooks,and the other called Ann Friedman. Stephanie's eyes are the same color as Ann's. And both Stephanie and Ann have black hair. Furthermore, Stephanie is the same height as Ann. Stephanie born in July 7, 1970. Similarly, Ann also born in July 7, 1970.
一樣NO結論句
回覆刪除be called
回覆刪除不然會沒有動詞
一樣 on+date
還有少了結論句
born on
回覆刪除有點單調 都用一樣的
單複數注意
born in ...on
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There are two driver's license which found in the park found前面+are
回覆刪除恩.....啊你怎麼知道是在公園裡找到的
in July 7, 1970 =>on July 7, 1970
Ann also born in July 7, 1970.
回覆刪除不是用in吧
Stephanie born in July 7, 1970. Similarly, Ann also born in July 7, 1970. 這兩個句子可以合併起來
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介係詞, 生日應該是on不是in
還有你的結論句~~