2011年6月1日 星期三

Comparing-revise1

There are two important Americans, John Adams and Tomas Jefferson.  First of all, both John and Tomas died on July 4, 1826.  Secondly, John Adams was an important person in the American Revolution.  Similarly, Thomas Jeffereson played important role in American Revolution.  Third, John delegated to theContinental Congress.  Likewise, Thomas also delegated to the Continental Congress. Fourth, John was signer of Declaration of Independence, and so was Thomas.  Moreover, they were both U.S. president before.  Finally, John studied and practiced law.  Likewise, Thomas studied and practiced law.  To sum up, they were famous people in America history.

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