Contrasting-revise 2

I have received two resumes, and I chose Debra Fine to be English Instructor in our school for following reasons.  First of all, Debra studied in BA English, McGill University from 1993 to 1997.  Besides, she also studied MA English, University of Toronto and PhD Linguistics, University of Pennsylvania.  However, Lynn only studied in BA Spanish, New York University.  Secondly, Debra is abundant in experience because she has worked at least eighteen years.  Unlike Debra, Lynn didn't has so much experience like her. Third, Debra also publicated English Verb Tenses, Shortman Publishing Company, 2006, but Lynn didn't do it.  Last but no least, Debra not only can teach English for students but also can teach how to swim for studens.  On the other hand, Lynn only can teach English for students.  To sum up, I expect that Debra Fine can do her best to let her student do well on their English abilities.