2011年6月9日 星期四

Discussing effect-1

There are several effects of global warming.  First of all, most of land will disappear when sea level rises.  If this situation happens, our home or even our country will under the sea.  Secondly, our crops will decline due to no water.  Therefore, we would die of starvation ultimately.  In addition,  typhoons will come more frequently and more strongly which causes serious floods.  In short,  global warming will cause serious impact on the human and the environment we are living.

5 則留言:

  1. will+be 在接under
    還不錯可惜有點短

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  2. when sea level rises...冠詞勒?

    有些單複數要注意一下~


    再多一些敘述支持比較你的idea比較好!

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  3. land + S
    為什麼會沒有水應該要交代一下
    因為現在也有全球暖化阿 但是我們還是活的好好的:))

    還不錯喔

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  4. most of land

    , our crops will decline due to no water
    為什麼會沒水要解釋,因為你前面都說陸地被水淹了,後面又突然說沒水

    為什麼後面要全都用大寫啊?

    寫多一點去描述你的每一個點會更好

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