The new factory on Acton town will cause many effects which include positive effects and negative effects. First of all, the large factory will offer more jobs to people. Therefore, the economics of growth are of great importance. On the contrary, the factory will cause pollution. It will effect the environment of Acton town. In addition, it will offer more social places because there will be a lot of people moving to the Acton town. But the Acton town will be more noisy than before. In short, there are many effects when the new factory open in Acton town. All we can do is to adapt this envirnoment.
可以專注於往好或壞的方面描述
回覆刪除會更好:)
只要選擇好的方面或壞的方面去寫就好了!
回覆刪除我覺得第一句的更多工作機會
回覆刪除可以寫很多就好 因為他沒有前者可以比較
最近的文章都很有水準:))
the economics of growth 反了吧?
回覆刪除On the contrary, the factory will cause pollution. It will effect the environment of Acton town 這點寫的太簡短 不知道污染是什麼污染要怎麼影響環境
應該要選一個方面寫
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